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Awesome artwork!

I love the style of your girls

bocodamondo responds:

thanks ^^
im really happy the direction my art style has evolved into, since it was soo generic back at 2013

I like them. They look awesome!

I like the lighting and the feeling it gives the background.

I think that you can fix/improve the area of neck and shoulders, it feels with a long width and that is a characteristic more of men than women. Also, the legs are so long, but despite the disproportion, she looks good :)

paperspine responds:

Thanks for the crit! :) I agree, there was a lot of difficulty with fine-tuning the neck and shoulder areas. The legs weren't immediately on my radar, but thanks for pointing that out. I'll keep that stuff in mind next time.

*o* "Bon Appetit" *¬* Lo mejor ese sector donde se juntan 3 viñetas: donde se mira en el espejo, donde sirve los platos y donde dice "Bon Appetit".

Reit9 responds:

hehehehe
gracias bro

I think that you can improve the hands and feet. For example, the proportion of the thumb of the hand that is in the floor is strange in comparison with the rest. In the feet, one foot looks like the other, as if the two feet had the thumb in the same side of the foot.

Anyways, I know that is a sketch only. For example, I usually draw the hands like a circle in the sketch and I do the details in the moment of lineart. But I not think it's the best if one will try upload the sketch to an art gallery.

I like it. The end is the best part xD

¡Encuentro genial que hagas proyectos personales!

El dibujo y el pintado están muy buenos.

Además, me encantan las historias que involucran pelo viviente, es tan "imagina las posibilidades" xD

Reit9 responds:

muchas gracias
y si, quiero hacerlo mas seguido :P

I like this painting so much, any time that I see it in the "Latest From Your Friends & Favorites" section, I open it.

Amazing! Very Very good.

Very good! But in the skin's color is evident the separation between the face and the chin for the dialogue.

And I like Ryuko Matoi so much.

bocodamondo responds:

the animation doesn't have that error, only GIF is piece of junk that created that.

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